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She wakes up feeling heavy
And she doesn't know why.
Glowing like the sun
On a warm April day.
She's got it all together;
A few more months and
She'll be on her way.
Everything she wanted
Is lying at her feet.

She drinks a glass of water;
Somehow something doesn't feel quite right.
Got his picture on her wall,
But where'd he go last night?
She could never say she loved him
Though he'd say it all the time.
She looks down at her shaking hands
And she can't believe her eyes.

Every tomorrow's coming faster;
Yesterdays get far away.
If it weren't for the morning after
She'd have back those wasted days.

She wakes up screaming,
Wishes it was all a dream.
Got his hand in hers
But she still feels so alone.
They try to talk it over;
Every option seems worse than the last.
He says it's just the wrong time
But she doesn't want this life.

Every tomorrow's coming faster;
Yesterdays get far away.
If it weren't for the morning after
She'd have back those wasted days.
©2009 ~Maich
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(Music by Alex Maich, Lyrics by Ryan Luke and Alex Maich)

Okay, so I decided to start posting again. I figured there's no point in not posting just because I'm not getting feedback (until I bitch about not getting feedback, apparently).

This is the first piece I wrote with Ryan Luke, my drummer. It's not the best thing either one of us has ever written, but it's decent.

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I feel like this is about someone pregnant.

But I also... feel this. It's good. Really good.

It would make a great layered piece with vocal harmonies and some synth. or just stark truth-baring acoustic.
I'm sure you'll turn it into something worthy.

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im glad that you liked this so much. im not exactly sure what you had in mind with the synth, but it is actually sorta layered like that. acoustic, 2 electric, multiple vocal parts. im just not sure that its a stellar piece.

youre very good at reading into all the right things

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