He turns all the lights on so they'll think somebody's home.
He turns on the TV so he doesn't feel alone.
He prays to God above this is as bad as it gets.
He's too young to forget, and too old for regrets.
The clock tower rings and the people all shout,
But there ain't nobody there, so he whispers to himself.
He takes another drink from his bottle of Jackie D.
There's got to be something at the bottom, cuz there's nothing up here for me.
Do I have to stay awake all night
Just to have another soul to tell me I'm alive?
And he starts the new year lying on the floor.
What do I have to show for my wasted youth?
Nothing but a beat-up six-string and a hunger for the truth.
Got no one here to talk to, got no one here to see.
Everyone's got someone, ain't no one getting me.
Lipstick on the mirror says "Call me anytime."
He's too worried about what she thinks to call her tonight.
So he starts the new year homesick and alone.
Do I have another year in me?














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Don't let the lack of comments let you think otherwise, practically all are meaningless on this site anyway c:
As for me, I have to be in an extremely mellow mood to give writing a fair shot. If not, I can't appreciate it the way it should be appreciated.
You're right about the pov switches, they're a bit confusing at first, but easily gotten used to.
Loved this line: "He's too young to forget, and too old for regrets."
But these two.. boy, when do you start recording?: "Lipstick on the mirror says "Call me anytime."
He's too worried about what she thinks to call her tonight."
Great Job, A.M. Great job.
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I just feel like a bit of variation in your tone while singing would keep listeners attentions sharper. I absolutely love the lyrics, and the music -especially the harmonica bit (was that you also?)- but the vocals were flat. I didn't feel anything while taking in that beautiful narrative. It felt too composed. I'm not sure if that makes sense or not... haha sorry.
Looking forward to more music from you, I think you have great potential.
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This is great; is it weird that i didn't find the POV switches confusing at all? (then again, I am an odd one). But I'm listening to the recording you did right now and I love all of the longing and feared emptiness in this piece. This is truly great.
(and harmonica solo! hooray!)
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this just....flows.
its like I can already hear the melody washing over these heart driven lyrics.
seriously alex.
wow.
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