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Lady Alabama by ~Maich:iconMaich:



She was a country girl with long, curly hair
As golden as the sand on which she stood
And a smile that shone like the San Diego sun.
I was a city boy with a city girl back home.
Late one night, this little restaurant,
I sat alone with a drink in my hand.
I caught her eye and she asked me to sit.
I asked her name but I don't know what she said.

Lady Alabama, I remember you.
Looking out on the California sunset
Hoping you'd remember, too.
Lady Alabama, if it's alright,
I just wanted to tell you
That you opened my eyes that night.

Her eyes were like little blue diamonds,
Her lips were a deep cherry blossom red.
I asked what she did and where she was from.
"Alabama" was all that she said.

Lady Alabama, I remember you.
Looking out on the California sunset
Hoping you'd remember, too.
Lady Alabama, if it's alright,
I just wanted to tell you
That you opened my eyes that night.

Lady Alabama, I remember you.
Looking out on the California sunset
Hoping you'd remember, too.
Lady Alabama, if it's alright,
I just wanted to tell you
That you opened my eyes that night.

When I got back to my little city girl
Things just weren't the same.
Her eyes didn't sparkle like I thought they did,
And little by little we drifted away.
She stopped and turned on her way out the door
And she asked me why my love went dead.
I looked in her eyes and I took a deep breath.
"Alabama" was all that I said.
©2009 ~Maich
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Author's Comments

I don't really have much to say about this one. Critique would be GREATLY appreciated.

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I like it, its cute and heartfelt and uses the "alabama" device just right.

i just hope its not real twangy-like.

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haha no. its... quiet. thats the best word i can think of for it. just... quiet

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So I sit down here and every few weeks say, "I'm going to give advice"

Then I just can never focus.
So, just so you know I'm reading your stuff, but in order to get my opinion (not that it's that important) I would have to read it in person. I'm just not good at the typing thing.

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